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英作文（英検二級）の添削をお願いします！
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最近、家にテレビを持ってない人がいます。
あなたは、将来このような人たちが増えると思いますか？

I think that the number of such people will increase in the future.

Firstly,we can get information and news without a television.
Smartphone is instead of it is useful for us to get information that we want to know rapidly.

Secondly,we can see entertainments in smartphone.
I think YouTube is more exciting than TV programs.
If I find exciting video, I can share my friends who are apart.

So,I think that there will be more such people in the future.