Question

島野島次郎

金沢大学2024英語の英作文の添削をしていただけませんか。見づらかったらすみません。

In my opinion, we should be promote equality and
recognition of educational background. Now, stady
devide continue to spread further. For example.
TV problem I have watched showed a poor boy
do
in South Africa
The boy who working housewort
not have time enough to go
and money enough to do
To
the school
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I proved that there
are many childrench would like to go to school.
I believe that everyone
, but they cannot do
should understand those situation in which children
suffer from having little money. Moreover,
put into
we.
practice such as donating money and
volunteer that we help them to study. Through those
experiences, educational background may close to
equality
11年

III Read the following sentence and answer the question.
Characteristics of diversity include gender identity, sexual orientation, physical
or mental disability/ability, race, ethnicity, nationality, social class, religion, age,
language, and educational background.
and col
Question:
How important do you think it is to promote equality and recognition
of diversity in our society? Write your answer in a paragraph of 80 or
more words in English. Your response should address one of the
specific characteristics above, an example of its current situation, and
any possible changes you would like to see.d
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