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Hi!
I have something to tell you about. I went to a library with my friends yesterday.
I wanted to study at home, but my friends suggested studying at a quiet place.
So, we went to the library near the station. It was very beautiful, and there was a
surprise. There was a café in the library. Do you think such cafés will become
popular in the future?
Your friend,
Alex

*I'm really interested in libraries! What time does a library near the station
open? And, what time does it close? About your questions I think cafes in
the libraries will become popular in the future. If so, people can rake a
rest after read many books.