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Some people do one kind of job in the daytime and do a different job at
night. Do you think the number of such people will increase in the
future?
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I do not think the number of such people will increase in the future i
This essay
will explain two main reasons for my argument.
First, it would not be necessary to do a different Job at night,
This is partly because It isn't important for us to job than your
health. Second, worker do a large amount job in the day time
and have been jobed have a but effect on work-life balance.
For example, unspleep can't power of job. For the reasons
mention above, the long time worker will decrease in the future.

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