Question

ことね

自由英作文の添削をお願いしたいです！

できれば他の表現だったたり、自由英作文のことだったりいろいろ聞きたいです！

お願いします🙇‍♀️

英語の早期教育
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It is true.
be an idea that the calier people start to learn
However
there
way
foreign languages, the better they require it :
this idea
I disagree with carly English education
own
misses the fact that they should prioritize requiring
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foreign language
Ever junior high school
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students and high school students how difficulty studying
Conguage. Je, early English education should not be adopted.
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・本語の早期教育
○小さい頃の方が語学力は身につきやすい 国語力を身につけるのが優先
(高校生がマを国語に苦労している)

Answer 1

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taka

自分の意見の内容の簡潔さ、流れのスムーズさが感じられる、とても良い自由英作文だと思います。
若干の修正をしていますが、あくまでも参考と考えてください。

I disagree with early English education. 〇
It is true, there may be an idea that the earlier people start to learn a foreign language, the bettter they [require] it.
→ It is true (that) there may be an idea that the earlier people start to learn a foreign language, the bettter they [acquire] it.
※It is true, → To be sure, も可能
However, this idea misses the fact that they should prioritize requiring own language than a foreign language.
→ However, this idea misses the fact that they should prioritize acquiring their own language over a foreign language.
※prioritize A over B BよりもAを優先させる
Even junior high school students and high school students have difficulty studying own language. 〇
→ Junior high school students and even high school students have difficulty studying their own language. ◎
So, early English education should not be adopted. 〇
※So, → Thus, Therefore, の方が良いかな？

ことね

ありがとうございます！！
今後も自由英作文頑張っていきたいのでまたぜひ添削していただけると嬉しいです☺️

taka

Anytime!😊