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I disagree that Big companies
have a positive effect on
society. I have two reasons.
Firstly, it is bad for
the environment to produdet @
[arge-scale products. Big company
mode a lot of products
so they use maturials such
as water, electric, and gas@
Also, they discharge carbou
dioxide. By doing so, global
warming will be increasing. Secondly
worker is difficult to grotect!
Work-life balance. Big companies
ask them for many job 1,0
Go they will
home
go
at late night. Also some peode
have to move their house
for working. They will lose
their free time, and fell,.
tired. Therefore, big companies
have a lot of bod
points. I think people should
work widdle or small companies
than big companies
will have a happy lifel.
and google