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Communication through computers or smartphones has good influence on people. I think that communication through computers or smartphone has a bad influence on people.I have two reasons to support my opinion.

First of all, it makes people not to talk face to face. These days, many people use a phone while they communication eachother. For example, they use message and call by phone Therefore, they don't have enough opportunities to talk directly.

Second of all, sometimes it makes us misunderstand.In particular, using message is nessesarly to communicate in writing and thus, it sometimes caused misunderstand. This situation have neggative effect on relation ship at the worse case.
According to the reasons I mentioned above, communication through computers or smartphone is not good for us.

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Topic Communication through computers or smartphones has
good influence
people
Points = time difference, share the same messages, take face to
I think that
Communication through computers or smartphones
had bad influence on
I have two reasons to support
people.
my opinion.
First of all, it makes people not to talk face to face.
These days, many people use a phone while they communication
eachother. For example, they use message and call by phone
Therefore, they don't have an opportunities to talk directly.
Second of all, sometimes it makes us misunderstand.
In particular, using message is hessesarly to communicate
Caused misunderstand.
in writing and thus, it
This situation have a neggative effect on relationship
at the worse. case..
ectly call by phone
at the worse case.
at worse,
In the worst case,
According to the reasons I mentioned above, Communication
through computers or Smartphone is not good for us.