Question

みかん

この英文は合ってますか？
教えてください！

ジョンの人生設計を参考に, 未来の予定とその理由について友だちと会話をしましょう。
At the age of 18, John is going to enter university.
While he is studying at university, he is going to study abroad. M
After he graduates from university at the age of 22, he is going
to get a job. He is going to get married by the
of 30.
age
and could
Age
18
20
22
Events
graduate and
get a job
25-30 get married
A: At what age are you going to get a job?
B: I'm going to get a job at the
age of 2.2
because that is when I graduate and get a job.
A: That's great!
enter university
study abroad

Answer 1

taka

意味は間違いなく伝わりますが、少し修正すれば、もっと良くなると感じます。

B: I'm going to get a job at the age of 22 because that's when I graduate from university.
※get a job は because の前にあるので、because の後ろにはなくても良いと思います。

参考にしてください。