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英検準二級のライティングの添削をお願いします。

Q. Do you think it is good for children to go shopping alone?

私の回答 I think that it is good for children to go shopping alone.
I have two reasons.
First ,children can learn a lot of things.
For example, they can learn how to use money.
Second, children can communicate with many people.
For these reasons, I believe that it is good for children to go shopping alone.
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