Question

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条件
・50～60語
・理由2つ

1. Do you think it is better for people to live in the city or
the countryside?
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A. I think it is better for people to live in the countryside.
I have two
reasons.
First, by living in the countryside, you can get communication
skill. People have deep relationship with others in the countrysid.
So, you can talk
many people.
Second, the countryside is rich in nature. You can enjoy fishing
and going hiking. (55)