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ぴーやま

英作文の添削をお願いたいです。
一題だけでも良いのでお願いします。

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have
hod
any plons for the weekend!
with my- friend.
- I'm going to
And then. I go To the hotel to have dinner.
watch the movie
I'm looking forward
to doing it.

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2on g0 on
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The ranch.
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fun.
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No. But I wont to g0 t0 Australia.
Becouse
fovorite singer is trom Australia.
And I heor d thot Aust ralion food is good

what were you cdoing arounod 9 o'clock?
- I wos malにing a re port.
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Scien titic
ex peri ment.
of it.
Iwas
Very tired be cause

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③の　I’m going to watch the movie with my friend.
は，”the“ではなく”a“を使う方がいいと思います。

　　　And then, I go to the hotel to have dinner.
“I go”ではなく, “I will go”のほうがいいと思います。友達となら”we will go”ですね。(will は未来形)

　　　I’m looking forward to doing it.
“I’m looking forward to”までは合ってますが,”doing it”はこの文章的に合っていないと思います。”doing“なしで、I’m looking forward to it. だけで大丈夫だと思います。(他の言い方ももちろんあります)

間違えてたらごめんなさい🙇‍♀️ ③だけ直しました。