英検準一級のライティングです。 添削をお願いしたいです🙇‍♀️

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Task1は問題の意味はわかったのですが、上の疑問文を使ってどう書けば良いのかわからないので教えて欲しいです🙇‍♀️ Task2のほうは自分の回答があってるか見て欲しいです🙇‍♀️ どなたかすみませんがよろしくお願いします🙇‍♀️

ナウン クローズ 単語のあつまり 主語 と動詞 それ自身 では として A noun clause is a group of words with a subject and verb. A noun clause cannot stand by itself as a 独立できん sentence. 従う 私が提案することはつづける? T A subject of a verb 06956 An object of a verb A subject complement 補 66968 前置詞 An object of a prepositio 446307 An adjective complement アドジェクティブ 異なる食事を What I suggest is following a different diet. I don't think that I want to exercise. Your problem is that you need some motivation. 変える You can change your weight by what you eat. よってあなたが何を食べるかに Everyone is glad that Betty is getting married. That noun clauses usually follow... S+ V agree, believe, decide, guess, hope, think, suggest ... 学校のために I agree that we need more teachers for the school. S+ be verb + adjective afraid, angry, glad, worried, sorry, sure, surprised. . . 招待する 食 Tommy was surprised that you didn't invite him to your wedding. It + be verb + adjective amazing, clear, good, important, necessary, possible, true... It is possible that we'll have to take the exam in February. 可能がある Task 123 しげんをうけなければ いけない 名詞節 Complete the sentences using a noun clause. ex. Where did Gareth learn how to skate? → I wonder where Gareth learned how to skate. 1. How did he get the job? 2. Why is that woman standing outside? → He is curious about 3. We need to take out the trash tomorrow. → It is important Task 2 Circle the answers. is a mystery. I lost my mother's ring. She asked me where a. is her ring b. her ring was c. is your ring d. was her ring 3 The little boy next door is popular, but I don't know how many a. friends does he have b. friends has he c. does he have friends d. friends he has 2 The neighbors are playing their music loudly. I can't hear what a. is saying you b. you says you are saying d. that you says 4 I'm not going to fix up my apartment. is too expensive. 私がしたいこと a. Whether I want to do (b. What I want to do c. What do I want to do d. That I want to do

9がなぜbetterなのか教えて頂きたいです moreとは何が違うのですか？

plore the problem, the ( 8. 冷静に対応すればするほど、 複雑な状況でもうまくいきます。 The more ( situations. more > you get to the core. calmly) ) you respond, the more ( successfully ) you handle complex 9. 自分の感情をコントロールできればできるほど、 良い人間関係が築けます。 The ( build. more bettokyou you manage your emotions, the ( better relationships you 10

英検2級英作文 添削お願い致します🙇‍♀️ 字が汚くてすみません💦

71501 19 11 Yes, I think so. I have two reasons. First, It is nice to protect environment. Today, there are many environment problems, such as global warming, water pollution. So, we have to create environmentaly friendly products and services. Second, environment thing for all people. Everyone has relationship with it. Then, we must solve this problem together. It will hard to do it alone, but if we help each other, we will success. Therefore, I hope that many people work for companies that create environmentally friendly products services. and

カッコで囲んだとこの英文の1つ目のandからの訳がどうして2枚目のようになるのか教えてください。 2枚目のどんな疑問が重要か〜の次のとこからです

ample practices varied across time and place. The truth is that we about what preliterate societies knew or believed. But they left behind *. evidence of their attention to the movements of the Sun and the phases of the Moon. And we can be sure that whatever questions they asked of the heavens were very different from those that motivate space exploration today. (A) rotic othe In reality, the difference between ancient and modern knowledge systems is more qualitative than quantitative; it is not about how much is known, but about what questions are important and about the acceptable ways of asking and answering those questions. And while we may not easily be able to slip between our modern worldview and those of others, we can nonetheless attempt to do so by asking not what ancient people knew about the world, but what their questions were when they looked at it. If we do this in the case of Mars, examining a few of the earliest known examples from around the world, we can see how sky knowledge was considered important to the functioning of the state whether it was *astrological knowledge in the service of good governance, or knowledge of bloodlines and relationships with the gods and other sky entities, which was used (B) - verdd

答えあっていますでしょうか、、！！🥲🥲

ジョンは試験で忙しい nived to F 11. John is busy ( ) for an examination. be busy (in) doing Dto preparing preparing 2 将来何がおこるかわからない ~するのに忙しい ③ prepared Jon o hablo anied to bists at al ④ prepare pos 〈関西外国語大〉 ture. 3 no to tell 1 what will happen in the future. There is no doing ~できない e is no doing a wo 12. There is ( ) what will 12190 〈大阪 no telling ② not telling 13. It ( ④ not to tell あなたは練習をとおして得点を向上できるのは言うまでもない 〈城西大〉 ) that you can improve your score through practice. It goes without saying that SV 〈大学 ① is not useful saying 3 is without said は言うまでもない aded ② will not help to say Needless to say, SV... ④ goes without saying usult of bliss 〈国士舘大) みじかい休みをとりたい気分ではありませんか feel like doing ~したい気分だ 3 go ④ take <浜松大〉 その店から飲料をとったどろぼうは逃げた ef snd 14. You look tired. Don't you feel ( ) taking a short break? ① love ②like 警察を見るとすぐに 15. On ( ① seen 2 saw the police officer, the thief who took the groceries from the store ran away. ③seeing see 〈高千穂大〉 on doing ~するとすぐに as soon as sv

⑶の答えが3なのもわかりますが、そのまえに、良い行動と集中力の向上にもつながる的なことを書いていたから、わたしは1もありえると思うのですが、なぜでしょう。

lunches. For example, the PCRM advises schools to provide one vegetarian dish daily as well as fresh fruit and a non-dairy drink. Research shows that these food choices have low fat content, fewer calories, and greater amounts of fiber and nutrients. They also promote good behavior and better concentration. Schools that eagerly adopted the PCRM guidelines ( 3 ) children's attitudes and plan to continue with these healthy choices. Hopefully, with the help of the PCRM, the new guidelines will spread rapidly throughout the United States. ⑤ 3 Even then 2 By mistake (1) 1 As usual (2) 1 are making excuses 3 helped cause the situation (3) 1 contributed research about 3 experienced positive changes in 4 In addition 2 have already solved the problem 4 will be in charge 2 dismissed the good results about 4 wondered about the effects on

ピンクの所なのですが、なぜI got off the trainから倒置がおきてhad I gotten offなのですか？ もとの文がただの過去形だからdid I get offじゃないんですか？

Com ~ UNIT 2 接続詞の慣用表現 as soon as ~ 「~するとすぐに」 のように, 2語以上で接続詞として働く表現 で表すこともできる。 を確認していく。 例えば、 このas soon as 〜の表現は, the minute instant / momento ~ As soon as I got off the train, I found my purse had been stolen. 「電車を降りるとすぐ, 財布が盗まれていることがわかった」 =The minute I got off the train, I found my purse had been stolen. さらに,nosooner ~ と than... hardly scarcely] when before... t ~ 「倒置が起こることに注意する。 (p.93 参照) 同じ意味を表せる。 ただし, これらの表現では,〜の部分に過去完了形が用いられ、 = No sooner had I gotten off the train than I found my purse had been stolen. - Hardly [Scarcely] had I gotten off the train when [before] I found = my purse had been stolen. このような2語以上で従位接続詞の働きをする表現を以下にまとめる。

❌の部分が全くわかりません。教えていただけないでしょうか？

Choose a suitable form of can, could, be able to, manage to or succeed in to complete the sentences. 1) The manager was somewhat reluctant but in the end I get a refund. : manage to 2) It was annoying; I get on to any of the websites you recommended. : could 3) When does the next match start? I : was able to X X hardly hear the last announcement.

英語で質問があります。 (9)の答えで①にならない理由を教えていただきたいです！（ ; ; ）

Dreplies 2 reply (3) had replied 質問したんだけど、返事をくれるかなあvo/thin (9) The current situation in the Middle East ( Wiepły ) all around the world since it may affect the global energy industry. ①has been watching is watching 3 is being watched ④ watched (駒澤大) ①