英語で自己紹介文を書きました。添削をお願いしたいです。 中3で、高校受験で英作文が必要になったため練習をしています。個人情報は隠しています。語数は141語です。単語を調べたりはしていないので間違えているところがあると思います。 よろしくお願いします🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

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量子力学モデル(quantum mechanical model) とは何か簡単に概要だけでも教えてもらえませんか？ 高校何年生でやるのかだけでも構わないので教えてください🙇‍♂️

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1枚目の文の下線部の構造が全くわかりません。 教えてください！

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学校でここをコピーしたプリントを宿題としてやったんですけど答えを順に発表していくスタイルで答え合わせをするので、先に自分で答え合わせしたいので、答えを教えてくださいm(__)m

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こういった重要な事柄が何故these are the important items になるのですか？ are 必要なくないですか？

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過 日本の学校にまだ慣れないBethに, 和明がその日の予定を教えています。以下の の ( ) に適する語を選んで入れてみましょう。 There o( ) three main buildings in our school/Tn the morning We usually @( ) classes in the General Building/After lunch we change buildings, Today, fifth period is biology. The lab ( ) in the Science Building. Then, we e( ) again to the Arts Building for a calligraphy class. After that, we will go to the gym for a school assembly. Today's schedule may @( ) a little busy. 1S 學e have Sound move

回答がつかないため二度目の投稿失礼します。 この問題の答えはCです。 be動詞があるのでSVCの形になり名詞か形容詞が入る。というのはわかるんですが、(B)(C)(D)は全て形容詞でSVCに形を取れるのでそこからどう見分ければいいか、特にBとCの違いがわかりません。 ... 続きを読む

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