英検準1級ライティングの添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか全くわからなければ、言ってもらえると… あと、筆記試験90分の間でライティングを書かないといけないんですけど、本当にライティングが苦手で、少しでも短時間で良い文章を書くコツを教えてください！具体的に言えば、英文... 続きを読む

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. OUse TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC or disagree: More companies will allow employees to work from 情報セキュグ 危ない disag Agree home in the future POINTS ●Information security Communication Recruitment Cost reduction I do 1 仕事の内容の 外部漏れの危険 1 not agree home in the future and I have two reasons to support Day 2 Day 3 ・直接コミュニケーションをとれない一誤解を招くおそれ (記録をしないと) 相手と商談や会議等の連絡をメールや コスト削減。 電話しないといけない手間がかかる。 Day that more companies will allow employees to work from 4 this opinion... on One of the reason is that employees cannot communicate on meet easily. They have to keep in touch with partner about importan things such as meetings the phone or e-mail, so they might take so much time to do this. Also, might make mistakes if they do not communicate on the phones or e-mail without s keep records of communication. Day they Another of the reason is that it companies might need to improve employees houses information security.. If do not do this, documents might be seen by companies many people such as employees' familys, and visitors to them, For these reasons abore, more companies will not allow employees to work from home if these problems are solved. total: 143 words Da 6

英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

英検　準ニ級　リーディングの添削お願いします 問題文は. Do you think it is better for students to study alone or in a group? です

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添削お願いします　質問はDo you think it is good for children to watch TV? です

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英検準2添削お願いします 質問はDo you think it is good to buy used products? です

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英検二級の英作文の練習をしているのですが、写真の中でなにか添削するところはありますか？ ご指摘していただけるならおねがいしたいです。

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| 19 Some people leave their cars with the engines 19 shopping for a few minutes. ① run ② to run ran 20 when they go running [英検準2級] □20 According to the newspaper, the boy was knocked unconscious ande ATE lay on his back with ① his closed eyes ③ closing his eyes ② having his eyes closed ④ his eyes closed 〔明星大 (理工物化)〕 119 数分間買い物に行くとき, エンジンをかけっぱなしで車を離れる人がいる。 19④ running 付帯状況の with の構文では, with の後ろの名詞を基準に能動か受動かを見て, 後ろに続くのが現在分詞か過去分詞かを決めます。 ここでは「エンジンがかかっ ている」という能動の関係を見抜いて, ④running を選ぶこと。 □20 その新聞によると, その少年は強く打たれて意識不明になり、 目を閉じて 仰向けに横たわった。 [20 ④ his eyes closed 付帯状況の with の後ろには,「名詞+分詞」の形が続くことができます。 5 分詞が現在分詞か過去分詞かを決めるときは, 名詞を基準にして「する」 のか 「さ 「れる」のかを考えてみるとよいでしょう。 ここでは 「彼の目が閉じられている」 という受動的な関係があります。 ③ closing his eyes のように, 「with Ving」 の形 になることはありません。 分詞

英語 受動態 この文が、完了形になる理由が分かりません。 普通の受動態だと思っていました。 解説をお願いいたします。

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英検準1級writingです。 どなたか採点して頂けますか？ 分かりにくい所があれば遠慮なく言ってください。

177/25 Do you think that the government should use social media to make decisions? I disagree that government should use social media. to make decisions. First, I think there value of determining are politic things by communicating each politicians. Choosing option of solution online may cause them as they can touch. to fail their decision. screen easily to vote. be critical trouble of domestics. TS becoming worse economies. Second, This accident would One of the trouble to utilize social media would be dread to flood confident information of nations These informations can contain about civil's. WIf civils information revealed, it is said that civil's safe wouldn't be protected by their countries. Therefore, some countries is about to introduce social media should consider that it may pose negative effect on their countries circumstance. ./10

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Agree or Developed countries are obliged to assist less developed countries Write your English Composition in the space below. Developed countries should assist less developed countries. First, most of developping countries such aso Africa countries have no sufficient foods and building to live good condition. Also, these countries have little budget to promote their economies. It can be said that they can't make both and meet their own possetions. For settling this matter, d'the best way of making developing countries grow is to give opportunity of working. By doing to So, they would earn money and use this to solute this circumstance./2 10 15 Second 1 Supporting developing country would thake countifies all over the world peace. Communicating each other by discussing is one of trigger to get along with each countries. Keeping good relationship would enable us ¹e c not to agonize war. 15 Therefore, to supporti developping countries allow give 20 good wealth to not only these countries but also developed countries. 25 SEM 8 目