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ま

(英語　添削)

「90字程度で、オランダと日本の教育制度を比べて文を書く」という課題です。添削をして頂きたいです。よろしくお願いします。

I compared the Dutch and Japanese school systems. I have two opinions.
First of all, the compulsory education in the Netherlands is tuition-free. I think it is a good system because it prevents disparities in education between the rich and the poor.
Next, it is common there for students to fail or skip grade. I want this system in Japan because I sometimes find the classes difficult and want to go back to the previous grade.
In summary, I found that the Dutch school system allows each child to receive an education suited for their individual development.

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スムーズな文章にもしています。I have two reasons.だと英検3級みたいな感じなので変えました。参考にして頂ければ幸いです。

I compared the Dutch and Japanese school systems. I have two observations.
Firstly, compulsory education in the Netherlands is tuition-free. This system prevents disparities in education between the rich and poor.
Secondly, it is common there for students to fail or skip grades. I wish Japan had this system, as I sometimes find classes difficult and would like to review previous material.
In summary, I found that the Dutch school system allows each child to receive an education suited to their individual development.

ま

ありがとうございます！助かりました！

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I compared the Dutch and Japanese school systems and made two observations.
Firstly, compulsory education in the Netherlands is tuition-free, which prevents disparities in education between the rich and the poor.
Secondly, it is common for students in the Netherlands to repeat or skip grades. I wish Japan had this system, as I sometimes find classes challenging and would like to review previous material.
In summary, I found that the Dutch school system allows each child to receive an education tailored to their individual development.