添削お願い致します
I live near the sea, so there isn't much transportation . I always go to school by bus, but my school is far from my house. It takes about one hour one way. One day, I was very tired when I got on the bus. Unfortunately,there were so many people that I had to keep standing. Then I sat down and fell asleep. When I woke up and noticed, I realized that I was running in an unknown place. I missed my stop.I was worried because my house isn't within walking distance.The driver talked to me when I was going to get off with anxiously. He noticed that I was missed my stop and sent me to a bus stop near my house. I appreciate it very much.
最初に書きますが、基本的には学校や塾の先生などに聞いた方が確実な答えが返ってくるであろうということと、もし間違ってしまっていても責任を負うことはできませんので悪しからず。
まずは写真3枚見てください。(時間かかりました。ごめんなさい🙇♂️🙇♂️)
お題には、「なにをされたのか」と「なぜそう感じたか」を説明しろと書かれていましたが、この文には後者(理由)が書かれていないように思います。単語数は数えていませんが、もし足りないようであればどこか削ってでも入れなければ明確な減点になるかと思います。
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