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問題
Some people say that people today should spend less time using the Internet. Do you agree with this opinion?
ちなみに、字数は80〜100語です

Yes ldo.There are two
reasons.First,thesedays many people use
the Internet whenever they do
something,so their ability of thinking
something are becoming lower. lt is not
always bad things that they can know
about whatever they want to
know.However it is important to think
themselves at first.many people tend to
search for everything with it without
thinking themselves.Second people have
no time that they spend with their families
and friends because they spend every
time using it .For these reasons,| think
that people should spend less time using
.

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