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お題は人々は健康のために運動をもっとすべきか?です
I think soから読んでいただけると嬉しいです!

you. I think so. I have two reasons. First, they can hearing from lose their weights. By doing this, they will move easily. Second They are able to have great time because exercising make them happy. That's why I think people bught to exercise more for their health

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