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QUESTION
Do you think people should exercise more for their health?

asing maps is a wonderful idea. / Yes, I think so. I have two reasons.
First, they can lose their weights. I think it is important becauser
It helps them to more easily and stay healthy. Second, they feel
relax when they enjoy evercising. By this, they can have as good time.
Therefore, I belives people ought to exercise a lot of Times for health.
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Answer 1

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