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nana

富士山の噴火への対策、準備の作文です。添削お願いします！
（to不定詞の名詞、形容詞、副詞的用法を全て使用できているかも見て欲しいです！！😖）

Do you know we should do if Mt.Fuji eruption.
I think we need to prepare things to protect yourself.Such as, goggles, masks and helmets. If Mt. Fuji erupt, a lot of ash and rock are flying for us. So we have to use these to prevent it from entering the body and it hit the head. Also, It is necessany to check the evacuation routes to escape safely. This is because, when occur eruption, many people escape at the same time and rodes will be crowded.
So it is important to prevent accidents during evacuation.
We can't know when Mt. Fuji erupt. So we should always be prepared.

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english110ban

ごめんなさいね。添削はすごく時間がかかるので、言いたいことを推察して、試訳してみました。あくまでご参考のためですのであしからず。じっくり見直していないので、誤字脱字や文法等の間違いがあったらごめんなさい。

Do you think that Mt. Fuji will erupt anytime soon? According to a website from Google, you had better protect yourselves with masks and helmets. If you don’t, you will breathe in a lot of ash and be hit by falling rocks. It is also essential to check the safest and least busy evacuation route possible with enough time to spare, so that you can avoid getting stuck in any crowded route. For safer evacuation, you should take preventive action against anything dangerous. It is next to impossible to predict whether and when Mt. Fuji will erupt, you must be always be prepared.

english110ban

you must be always be prepared　の前に so が抜けてました。so you must be be prepared all the time.