Question

りんりん

英語の要約文です。文法とか単語だけあっているか教えてください

Josh has seen
a
Paralympic spart.
He is interested in sitting valley ball.
He has never been to
a Paralympic event.
Asami and Josh
are
talking about the Paralympic sports.
Josh has watched wheelchair tennis matches on TV.
He is a big fan of Kunieda shingo.
Asami has never heard of Kunieda.
Asami researched about wheelchair tennis,
Kunieda has won many wheelchair championships.
Asami was amazed at his power.
Kamiji became Grand Slam. Smiles keepher positive.
Her smiles keep us positive, too.
There is a special wheelchair company.
Ishii was wheelchair user.
His wheelchair was lighter.
• Kamji and Kunieda use his company's whed chairs.

Answer 1

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ひー

文法的には、問題はないと思います。
ですが、9行目、Kunieda has won many wheelchair championships.
この文は少し書き換えが必要かもしれません。
何度も勝利していると言いたいのであれば、Kunieda has won wheelchair championships many times. の方がいいかと思います。
元の文だと、一度にチャンピョンシップをたくさん制覇しているみたいに聞こえて、一回の大会でたくさん優勝しましたと言っているようです。
many timesということで、回数という意識が高まり、何度も勝っているのを想像しやすいと思います。
お役に立てれば良いです♪

りんりん

ありがとうございます