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TOPIC
Today, some companies have online interviews for people who apply
for jobs. Do you think this is a good idea?

I think companies should have
online intentions for people who
apply for jobs. I have
two reasons. In the first
place, people can have an interview
any where. Even if they live
to for place from the
company, they can interview remortely
from home. In the second
place, it is easy for
their to talk. Many people
will
get nervous to talk
face to face, so they
can talk about themself in
online. Therefore, companies ought to
have an interview remotely for job
hunting student.