Question

いちご大福

中一の英語です
明日、英語の授業でスピーチがあるのですが、この文章が変じゃないか見ていただきたいです。
修正点があればコメント下さるとありがたいです。

Answer 1

zmic

Your text is mostly correct. 👍

❌ he play the guitar
✅ he plays the guitar

All your sentences are very short, it's nicer to make a few longer sentences, like:
He is a singer, and he also plays the guitar.

❌ he makes a song
✅ He writes his own songs.