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I think local bookstores will disappear in the future.
I have two reasons why I think so.
The first reason is these days we are able to read book on our smartphone or Personal computer.
We don’t have to go to bookstore.
The second reason is I don’t have time to go to bookstore.
I am busy at studying so I don’t have time to go to bookstore.
It is for two reasons that I think local bookstore will decrease in the future.

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Today, the number of local bookstores is decreasing. Do you
think local bookstores will disappear in the future?
町の書店の変化や,自分がどこで
書籍を買っているかを考えてみよう。
POINTS
● Personal interests • Digital dataConvenience

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Answer 1

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✅ I think local bookstores will disappear in the future.
✅ I have two reasons why I think so.

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❌ we are able to read book
✅ we are able to read a book
✅ we are able to read books

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❌ my Personal computer
✅ my personal computer
✅ my PC
✅✅ my computer --> laptop or desktop

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❌ go to bookstore
❌ going to bookstore
✅ go to a/the bookstore
✅ going to a/the bookstore
✅ We don’t have to go to a bookstore.

✅ I don’t have time to go to a bookstore.
✅ I don’t have time to go to the bookstore.

✅ The second reason is I don’t have time to go to a bookstore.
✅✅ The second reason is that I don’t have time to go to a bookstore.

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❌ I am busy at studying
✅ I am busy studying
✅ I good/bad/great/terrible at studying
✅ I am busy at school (for the festival)
✅ I am busy studying so I don’t have time to go to a bookstore.
✅✅ I am busy with my studies so I don’t have time to go to a bookstore.

🟠 The second reason is that I don’t have time to go to a bookstore. I am busy studying so I don’t have time to go to a bookstore.
✅ The second reason is that I don’t have time to go to a bookstore because I'm busy studying.

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✅ [INTRODUCTION] It is for two reasons that I think...
❌ [CONCLUSION] It is for two reasons that I think...
✅ [CONCLUSION] It is for these two reasons that I think...

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increase and decrease
❌ people will decrease
✅ the number of people will decrease
❌ bookstores will decrease
✅ the number of bookstores will decrease

THINGS THAT CAN INCREASE/DECREASE: number, population, production, knowledge, ...

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❌ It is for two reasons that I think local bookstore will decrease in the future.
✅ It is for these (two) reasons that I think the number of local bookstores will decrease in the future.
✅ It is for these (two) reasons that I think local bookstores will disappear in the future.

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✅ I hope this is helpful.
✅ If you have questions, feel free to ask.
🤔 Maybe I have time to answer.

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