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Come people say that more apartment buildings should allow
pets such as dogs and cats. Do you agree
This opinion.
with
I don't agree with the opinion that more apartment buildings
should allow pets such as dogs and Cats.
I have two reasons
to support my opinions.
for the pets
Firstly, it is too small to live in the apartment.
For example, a big dog will feel stresses if they live
It is bad for pet's helth.
in the small room.
Secondly, moise is one of the critical factors.
Some people who lives/next to the room in the pet lem
when the pet bark at night. AR
Can't Sleep well
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mentioned above,
more apartment buildings shouldn't allow
For the reasons
I believe that
pets.

英検

Answer 1

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zmic

✅🟠🟠 Firstly, it is too small for the pets to live in the apartment.
✅🟠 Firstly, it is too small for pets to live in an apartment.
✅🟠 Firstly, it is too small a pet to live in an apartment.

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❓ what is "too small", the apartment, or living in the apartment ❓

🟠 living in an apartment is too small
✅ an apartment is too small for pets
✅ living in a small apartment is stressful for pets

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✅ Firstly, apartments are too small for a pet to live in.
✅ Firstly, apartments are too small for pets to live in.
✅ Firstly, an apartment is too small for a pet to live in.
✅✅ Firstly, most apartments are too small for pets to live in.

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❌ will feel stresses
✅ will feel stress
✅ will feel stressed

❌ the small room
❌ a big dog -> it; big dogs -> they
✅ For example, a big dog will feel stressed if it lives in a small room.
✅ For example, big dogs will feel stressed if they live in a small room.

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❌ It is bad for pet's health.
✅ It is bad for a/the pet's health.
✅ This is bad for a/the pet's health.
✅ This is bad for its health.
✅ This is bad for the health of a/the pet.
✅ This is bad for the health of an/the animal.

(the big dog) <--- the
(in general, a pet that feels stressed) <--- a

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✅🟠 Secondly, noise is one of the critical factors.
✅ Secondly, noise is an important problem.
✅ Secondly, noise is a critical issue.

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❌ bark
✅ Some people who live next to the room of the pet can't sleep well when the pet barks at night.
✅✅ Some people who live next door can't sleep well when the pet barks at night.
✅✅ Some neighbors can't sleep well when the pet barks at night.

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I hope this is helpful. Keep up the good work! 👍👍

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