① it was my first time to make 「何を」, but it was so fun.
② I had a lot of fun because I was able to make it cute and to draw a face by myself.
③ I played with my friend while we were on the bullet train(Shinkansen) on the way back home.
④ we talked while playing card games and eating snacks with my friends.
⑤ it’s a wonderful memory because we did what we can't experience at school.
⑥ through the school trip, I learned the importance of friends.
⑦ I want to use these great experiences for daily life in school from now on.
もう遅いかもしれないですが、、、
文だけで単調に訳すとこうなります!あとはbut, whenなどで文に繋がりを持たせてあげれば綺麗にまとまると思います!
他にもたくさん表現の仕方があるので、いろいろなのを取り入れてみてはどうでしょうか😊