Question

はやし

和文英訳についてです。
2枚目が私の回答です。添削お願いします😭

2. 私は彼が靴を手に持ったまま走っているのを見た。彼はまるで何か恐ろしいものに
でも追いかけられているように見えた。

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2) I saw him running with his having
his shoes in his hand.
He seemed as if he was being
chased by something terrible.

Answer 1

taka

2) ① his having → 不要　　② He → It
⇒ I saw him running with his shoes in his hand. It seemed as if he was being chased by something terrible.
【別解答】
I saw him running with his shoes in his hands. He looked as if he were being chased by something terrifying.

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