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TOPIC No. 7
Should people trust information on the Internet?
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think people should not trust information.
in
terms
of
learning
and
online shopping,
Firstly, in a lot of sites in the purpose of studying,
incorrect information exist because they can be edited.
by everyone regardless to its nationality, age and so on.
Contrary to them, information offered by books
like dictionaries are more
of being
Correct by the
reviewed them by others except editer.
if you buy
this is because
Secondly, you could not distinguish products which
renowned
brands
create from
their fakes
on
Therefore, You
them
wrong them
in order to
sophisticated
devising technologies
accurately
Photos make yau difficult to judge
Also, makers manifacturing copies of renowned brands
improve the quality of their goods so better that you must
confirm such as texture or weight
The lest you
ah
on
the Internet
Vitue
use
the Internet.
Virtually
the Internet.
should
real
information
prevent yourself from suffering their damage

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