Question

樹愛

英語二級のライティング添削をして欲しいです。またこれでどのくらいの点数をもらえるでしょうか？読みにくいかもしれませんがお願いします。

I do not think that Japanese should accept more people
from other counties to work in Japan.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.
• First, many people from other counties may have some
problems. For example, they speak freign language.
So it is difficult for these people communication with Japanese
is because
O Socond, Many Japanese worker will be fired. It
freigner who came to Japan to work work on low income.
For these reasons I think that Japanese should not
accept more people from other countries to work
in Japan.
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英検 英検2級 ライティング

Answer 1

きのこ

理由はいいのに、スペルミスと文法ミスが目立つし、うまく理由が英語に表現しきれてないから、6割とかじゃないかなー

きのこ

①外国語だから意思疎通が難しい
②雇用を外国人に奪われる

①Japanese language is not easy to learn.In fact,this language is one of the difficult languages to learn in the world. That’s why,it’s difficult for foreigners to communicate with Japanese people,which lead to some problems.

② If more and more foreign workers come to Japan,many firms or companies come to employ not Japanese but foreigners,because foreign workers can be employed at low cost,in comparison to Japanese.