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I agree
This
essay
of food and crime.
The first reason is that we are
many cases,
especially interested in food safety.
if we don't improve food safety, food is
likely
get worse and worse because of some
people will bring
we will be able to get healthy.
However, by improving;
The second reason
example, reducing crime
is that I want to reduce crime in society. For t
Soviet live in
can
for children. If it were
provide a good opportunity to
If it were not for reducing crime, we could not
have such an opportunity lieve that society needs to improve food
these
In
to
that more needs to be done to improve public safety.
will explain the two main reasons for my argument in terms
and crime.
on a disease.
disease
in safety

• Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
4
• Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
• Suggested length: 120-150 words
• Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your
answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
TOPIC
Agree or disagree: More needs to be done to improve public safety
POINTS
• Accidents
• Crime
• Food
Technology
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