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I agree with the opinion that modern technology can improve our ability to communicate. This essay will explain two reasons in terms of time and accessibility.
To begin with, modern technology made our communication quick. In the past, sending letters takes a lot of time. However, we need few seconds to communicate with people around the world by using the technologies such as phones and the Internet. They allow us to have communication more smoothly.
Second, the technology enable everyone to communicate with people in far place. SNS such as Line and Twitter need no money to use. As a result, even poor people can have communication with friends in foreign countries.
For these reasons, I believe that modern technology can make our ability of communication better.

Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Structure: Introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
TOPIC
Agree or disagree: Modern technology can improve our ability to communicate
POINTS
· Clarity of communication
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• Accessibility
Depth of communication sceneget co
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• Time

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