Question

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コンビニでの買い物の支払いがスマートフォンでできることはとても便利です。

It is very convenient to be able to pay for shopping at convenience stores with your smartphone.

添削よろしくお願いします。

Answer 1

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It is very convenient to be able to pay for shopping at convenience stores with your smartphone.でもＯＫですが、yourよりもour(自分を含める)の方が良いと思います。
→ It is very convenient to be able to pay for our shopping at convenience stores with our smartphone(s).

参考にしてください。