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QUESTION
Do you think there should be more sports programs on TV?
I think there should be more sports
programs on TV.
I have two reasons
for it
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First many people can learn sports.
For example they can know tennis
history.
Second, if many people watch sports
programs, they are interested in sports,
may
Therefore, I belive there should be more
!! Sports programs on TV,
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Answer 1

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I have two reasons for it.

First, many people can study sports. For example, people can learn about tennis history.

Second, if many people watch sports programs, they might be interested in sports.

Therefore, I believe that there should be sports programs on TV for these reasons.

文法的には合ってますがこちらの方が適切かなというので変更した箇所があります。