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英検準2級の英作文です。添削お願いします🙇‍♀️

Q Do you think convenience stores are a good
place to buy food?
I think so,
I have two reasons.
First, when we want to eat any food, convenience
stores are opened any time. So we can buy food
there,
Second, there are many kinds of food in
convenience stores.
stores. And, we can eat them soon
because the food was cooked:
Therefore, convenience stores is helpful for
people.

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