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TOPIK
Agree or Disagree /The Japanese government needs to encourge young people to live in rural areas.

ANSER
I do not agree this opineon. I have two reasons to support my case. The first reason is that the person liveing in urban area cannot adopt the rural life style in suddeny. The life stlye is absolty different between urban and rural, for example, there are many various shops in urban area, in contrast, rural area is inconvenient because there are only supermarket and a large ricefield ,so it takes long time to get used to. The second reason is that younger need to comute school every day. In urban areas has many kinds of school, so we tend to choose urban's school to be come true their dream. Then, if we live in rural areas, we will be difficult going to school. For these reasons, I think so.