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ⓆDo you think it is a good idea to let little children play with smartphones?

ⒶI don't think so. I have two reasons.
First, using smartphone give bad impact. For example, if children look screens long time, their eyesight may get bad.
Second, playing outside is important thing. Today, many children aren't go outside because of using smartphones too long.
Therefore, I don't think children playing with smartphones is a good idea.わ

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