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I dont think t is
Aood idea
that children shoud
have homework during sumney vacation. I hovc two
First, haring
"Svos0a
fowmy
have ro hameork duringy Summer vacatlon, they hare a
no homework js Connected with children's hapincs.
Jt
ol time
to do what they want to do. For ecample,
they arc able to Study hard for Junier highchiol entronce erays
or make a lot etur memories then.
poo2s
Second, homemork dlaring summer vacation odany usuolly give children
4ood efect. Thatis because most of tcachers cdon4 make hamemork
for each children
home work is not appricd to children.
OS
Children also tend to finish 付 last day of sumner vacat kn
For these reuson I dong thiak it nccessary
for children to have
homevork doring Summer vacaton
4
English Composition
Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
Write your essay in the space provided on your answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
TOPIC
Do you think children should have homework during summer vacation?
POINTS
Children's happiness
Teacher's workload
Preparation
Academic competitiveness
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ちなみにeffectはgiveするものではなく have an effect on するものです