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English Composition
Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
TOPIC
Should Japan do more to protect its historic sites?
POINTS
I Cost
Development
Education
Tourism
I think it is
a g0od idea that Japan should do more
to protect i4s historic sites. I hove three rensons,
First, a part ol Students in Jopon improves their achivenents,
Thot is becausethey become interested in Japanese history
geography oning to Secing its histeric stes ond stuldy
aponese histoy or geoguophy more haral then they have doie
before
or
Second vapun can corn money. If it found Some Shop Selling
Japanese food r goods oround its historic sites, tourists Come
There to cxperlene Japanese calture.
Third, pratecting its historic sites enables Japan t0 prevent trom
Causing a war with other Courtries、 That 1 because its
historíc Sites let tourists be impressed and they
come back
their courtry and tell ex lot et people their experience Se
H is ditirett for their governments to Conclude thut they can
Cortlict ond atack Japon due to note. make yrunbling peopl..
For these reeson, I think H necessary to protcct its historic ntes.
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