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Write an
ssay
given TOPIC.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
.Suggested length: 120-150 words
answer sheet.
Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
TOPIC
Should people's salaries be based on their job performance?
POINTS
⚫Age
Spend
2 Go fishin
Company profits
Motivation C
.
Skills
3 K
生産性が上がる→会社の利益につながる
多くのお金を得る。
barinqon gni
社員とする→お金をもらうため。
1 Her
2 Her
3. She
borilep Show and
worker
IS
E
スキルをもつため。
TI
by 1990sm or so of togiot H S
No. 11 1 Shanti soli jon bib ogni giring.
E.M

I think that people's salaries should be based on
their job performance for the following two reasons.
Firstly, most workers will work hardly then before.
hard
If the method are not introduced, workers won't
they can earn money
by t
by
tD
work hardly because they
doing nothing. Thus many workers will make effort
to get their salaries. Secondly, if many workers
work hardly, the productive of companies will
increase. Many workers want to earn money 150 they
finish a lot of tasks effectively. By doing so,
companies may earn money as company profit.
100

Therefore, people's salaries should be determined
people's salaries by confirming their active.