Question

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1つ目は教科書だけで学ぶよりも経験することで、楽しく学べる。
2つ目は歴史の建物や生活様式から歴史的背景を想像しやすく、モチベに繋がる
てきなことを書きました。

| 第1回
TOPIC
Some people say that it is necessary for people to
go to important historical sites in order to
understand history better. Do you agree with this
opinion?
POINTS
Experience
• Motivation
• Technology

第1回
I think that it is necessary for people to go to Important
historical sites in order to understand history better.
I have
First, we
two reasons why I think so. (28)
can experience old age.
(18)
I think that we can learn about history than using text book.
Second, it we go to there, we can imagine historical context.
For instance, we can see
can see the old architecture or life-stayle.
which is
lead studying motivation.
Because of the reasons above, I think that
it is necessary for people to
Important
histrical sites in order to understand history
go
for a long time
ago
better.
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