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物語「ケニアの兄妹にとって、通学は命がけです。」
Jackson, a boy in Kenya, gets up very early. His home is a hut far from any village. He has to walk 15 kilometers through the savannah to get to school. There are elephants, lions and other wild animals on the way.
"Watch out for the elephants," his father says. "And take care of your sister Salome. May you get to school safely." With this prayer, the children leave.
"Look over there!" Suddenly, the elephants come close. "Run!" Jackson pulls Salome along and they hide for a while.
"Phew! They have gone!"
For Jackson, just to get to school is a challenge. But he doesn't mind. His dream is to be a pilot. For him, school is a step toward a dream.
どのようなぶんにしたらいいですか?