Question

AYA_BF

作文の添削をお願いします。

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Answer 1

✨ 最佳解答 ✨

み

almostの使い方が違います。
It is made from mostly Nerikiri ~
とした方が良いでしょう

8行目のtry to make it ですが try making it の方が気軽に作れる感じがします。(減点はされないと思いますが)

AYA_BF

ありがとうございます！
助かります！