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後天就要考英文作文了～不過現在還是覺得自己寫得不夠順暢….希望有意願的人可以幫我看看哪裡有錯，或是怎麼樣修改可以更好！謝謝！

如果有人願意提供一些作文上的建議也謝謝您！🥰

People from all walks of life own various life experiences, they we who don't
have clear knowledge, for others' life stories shouldn't act spontaneously. Otherwise,
we may offend others, just as what I've done before when I was ten. It way
a beautiful afternoon.. I way walking around at the adopting agency
stray dogs with my aunt holding my hands. Out of the blue, I saw an ugly
and dirty dog. Iying down hady in its cage. I couldn't help but let out
a whine "How disgusting it is !" Ay 4oon as I shouted impolitely, my
aunt 4tared at me, angrily, and digna pointedly. "I can't believe that my
hephew 12.40 superfiwal that makes me feel ill!" she said it seriously
and went back to her car. I standed embarrassedly at the original
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place, having no ideas with what just happened.
I care fully got back to the car and said sorry to my aunt. "It
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me being 40 unconsiderate that I_ Overlooked your story with Lucky." I said
it guiltily. Then I summoned up my courage and made a confession to
my aunt that I was really overwhelmed by_sotrow while. Lucky, my
Qunt's lovely. pet dog, passed away. I had been acting strong with an
eye to covering my despair 4ince Lucky left us. I always teased at dogs
for the
purpose of avoiding to be a delicate person who actually feelz zad
for them. My aunt hugged me warmly and softly, saying nothing but gave
me a knowing smile after hearing my confession. It was then I realized
that everyone have the right to being fragile from time to time. Plus, you
don't have to bīde your emotions instead of hurting others, which is not
only Gilly but also imma[ure. Since then, I always think thoroughly before
I say anything, preventing myself from hurling others. Also, I care
people actively to understand more of their life stories!

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Answer 1

小魚🐟

不好意思！我現在才看到這個提問
但沒有作文題目，我不確定你寫的是否切題

個人私心給妳一點建議
考前不用急著調整自己了！
考試時作文最重要的還是「內容」言之有物且切題有好的「架構」
至於文法、詞藻，沒有大錯都不會影響太多！

建議考前睡飽、把自己曾經寫的好的文章多看幾次
或是看題目試想大綱
明天看到作文題目好好想清楚再下筆
祝你明天考試順利☺️