Question

kiyo

英語の添削お願いします。文法的な指摘、意味が伝わらないなど、お願いします🙏🙏
お題はペットを飼うことについてどう思うか。
I agree to have pets. I have two reasons.
First, I think that pets are so much mind heal.I have a dog.
For example,my dog was very happy when I gave her dog snacks. I looked that and was heal.
Second,we are able to learn about the importance of life .
If we don’t take care,even a dog and a cat,a goldfish die.So,we must take care of them to the last.
In conclusion,it has influence that it is good for us to have pets .

英語 英作文 作文

Answer 1

キム

agree with…「〜に賛成する」という意味になるのでagree toをagree withに直しましょう

kiyo

ありがとうございます🤍