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〜テーマ〜Should Japanese workers have more holidays?

Some people say Japanese workers have more holidays
There are some problems with Japanese workers have more holidays.
However, I support this opinion for the following two reasons.

The first reason is that Some Japanese workers tend to die from being overworked. Some Japanese companies are called “black enterprise.Some Japanese workers work busy without rest .
Life is the most important.

The second reason is that Japanese people work hard working.
They sometimes have to get a holiday.
It is good to work hard but take care of yourself.

For these reasons, we need Japanese workers have more holidays.
I hope Japanese people make it easier to work.

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