Question

さく🌷︎

英作文の添削をお願いします🙇🙏

I have two memories of my summer vacation.

The first is the summer course at the cram school. Normally I study for about three hours, but on Sundays I studied for more than seven hours, so it was hard, but my friends also worked hard, so I was able to do my best.

The second was a birthday party for my younger sister, who is in the first year of elementary school, and since August 7th is her birthday, we had a birthday party on the 8th, the next day. My sister loves to read, so I gave her a book as a gift and she was very happy with it, so I was happy too.

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Ryo.S

最終的には採点者の主観が含まれるので保証は出来かねますが、自分が見る限り直す必要があるような間違いはないですね、動詞の形も大丈夫です。
一応翻訳アプリ等してみたので自分の書きたい内容と一致してるか確かめてみて下さい。

さく🌷︎

ありがとうございます！！！！！