Question

訪客

I arrived in Kaohsiung Station at afternoon on last Friday. I had played the game with my cousins when it had been raining out of the house on last Saturday. I and cousins went to beach on last Sunday.

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華目。士個星期,你到高雄(Kaohsiung)的視戌家玩,下面是你每天的涵
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Answer 1

高㕘紋

沒有必要使用過去完成式吧

Answer 2

香魚

arrived at
in the afternoon
last Saturday.... ->no "on"
I was playing games...... while it was raining outside the house.
My cousins and I....

香魚

有疑問 可以再告訴我