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* I don't think so. I have two reasons. First, living with their family makes them
happy because they can share their feelings. By doing so, they are able to
relax and be fine. It is so amazing. Second, they can help them every
day.
It is a good opportunity to thank parents, Parents raise us hard
When we are child. Now, it is a turn to help parents a lot. Therefore,
I believe many young people live with their parents and help them.