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英検準2級ライティング
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お題は生徒はもっとコンピューターを使う時間を持つべきかです

I want TO
do some volunteer work I think so. I have two reasons. First, they can watch
movies abouts education. For example, how to grown flower how to read
English and so on. Second, they are able to use many computers
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I think it helps their future. Therefore I believe students ought to have more
time to use computers.