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nana

日本舞踊についての英作文を書きました。添削して欲しいです。

The custom that should be carried on in the future is ''Nihon Buyo''.It is traditional japanese dance. This is a dance born from Kabuki,one of japanese's traditional dances. Often dance with a fan to music with lyrics. This was derived from Kabuki in the Edo period. There was a problem in Kabuki that women were not allowed on stage due to public morals. Against this backdrop, the Japanese dance form was born, in which women stood on stage and danced. This has a unique beauty and expressiveness. Soft hands, graceful gestures and the kimono that is the costume are beautiful. People are fascinated by these. That's why Japanese dance is still passed down today.
Since Japanese dance is a combination of various traditional dances, it has many good points. So I think it should be continued to carry on.

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参考にしてくださいね。

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一例です。